Tuesday, April 03, 2007

Springtime in Maine

The Haunted Forest In The Morning
Smells Like...Dandy


Mark said...


Is the lack of punctuation in the poem part of the effort to "strip down"?

I mentally punctuated the poem yesterday. But I don't know if the poem is better with punctuation.

Maybe your artist's vision is better than my critic's vision.

jim dandy said...

Yes, I was definitely deliberate in my elimination of punctuation and capitalization to encourage ambiguous and ambivalent interpretation.
A humble rant, if you will.