Tuesday, April 03, 2007

Springtime in Maine

The Haunted Forest In The Morning
Smells Like...Dandy

2 comments:

Mark said...

Dandy,

Is the lack of punctuation in the poem part of the effort to "strip down"?

I mentally punctuated the poem yesterday. But I don't know if the poem is better with punctuation.

Maybe your artist's vision is better than my critic's vision.

jim dandy said...

Yes, I was definitely deliberate in my elimination of punctuation and capitalization to encourage ambiguous and ambivalent interpretation.
A humble rant, if you will.